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Building Ruin

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This is a drawing done with new art materials from Faber-Castell :P of a building ruin within the previous piece linked below, the roof is not included as it is not as important in my eyes.

Magelfan Ruin (Project Wonder) by Souptra 
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Alright,I like the overall concept of this. The basic structure looks good. However if this building is displayed in the foreground or mid, you should consider adding more details. The broken pieces feel a little uniform. Perhaps some pitting and crumbling might work, or some piles of old material that could be seen through some of the openings.

The varying shades help give it the 3d feel. Though the shadow is bit too hard around the edges. You might try softening it for future drawings so it fades out a bit.

If this is going to be a background object then what you have should work quite well.